Understanding skills and empathy

2023-10-27 · 첨삭 강사 Hanna

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Empathy and understanding are really important factors It plays a roles in creating good memories through first impressions when i meet new people while doing volunteer or activites. So, listening skills must come first and we should understand the other peoples. it can be helpful whatever you do

강사 첨삭

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-Hanna ^^

Empathy and understanding are really important factors

>>Empathy and understanding are really important factors.
It plays a roles in creating good memories through first impressions

when i meet new people while doing volunteer or activites.

>>They play a role in creating good memories through first impressions when I meet new people while doing volunteer activities.
So, listening skills must come first and we should understand the other peoples.

>>So, listening skills must come first, and we should seek to understand other people.
it can be helpful whatever you do

>>It can be helpful in whatever you do.

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