Unforgettable event in the year 2011

2012-01-02 · 첨삭 강사 Faye

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When I had tested equipment in the Heami, I received e-mail that major company seeks an experienced man from headhunter. So I send my application without any expectation. At that time I wrote the application until 3 a.m. l received that i passed the application phase of the hiring process. So I had to prepare the interview. When I interviewed, the interviewer ask that I already known. In the result I passed. Thank you for my God. When I need a help, he fills. It is unforgettable event.

강사 첨삭

Hello! Thank you for making a composition. I am so happy that you passed the interview. Great job! I am hoping that you will do good and be able to achieve a lot in that company. See you later! T.Joey Here are your corrections: When I had tested equipment in the Heami, I received e-mail that major company seeks an experienced man from headhunter. >>When I tested the equipment in Heami, I received an e-mail that the company seeks for experienced headhunter. So I send my application without any expectation. >>So I sent my application without any expectations. At that time I wrote the application until 3 a.m. >>Correct! l received that i passed the application phase of the hiring process. >>I received a message that I passed the application phase of the hiring process. So I had to prepare the interview. >>So I had to prepare for the interview. When I interviewed, the interviewer ask that I already known. >>When I had the interview, the interviewer asked what I already know. In the result I passed. >>As a result, I passed. Thank you for my God. >>Correct! When I need a help, he fills. >>When I need help he fills me in. It is unforgettable event. >>It is an unforgettable event.

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