Unforgettable event in the year 2011
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When I had tested equipment in the Heami, I received e-mail that major company seeks an experienced man from headhunter. So I send my application without any expectation. At that time I wrote the application until 3 a.m. l received that i passed the application phase of the hiring process. So I had to prepare the interview. When I interviewed, the interviewer ask that I already known. In the result I passed. Thank you for my God. When I need a help, he fills. It is unforgettable event.
강사 첨삭
Hello!
Thank you for making a composition. I am so happy that you passed the interview. Great job! I am hoping that you will do good and be able to achieve a lot in that company. See you later!
T.Joey
Here are your corrections:
When I had tested equipment in the Heami, I received e-mail that major company seeks an experienced man from headhunter.
>>When I tested the equipment in Heami, I received an e-mail that the company seeks for experienced headhunter.
So I send my application without any expectation.
>>So I sent my application without any expectations.
At that time I wrote the application until 3 a.m.
>>Correct!
l received that i passed the application phase of the hiring process.
>>I received a message that I passed the application phase of the hiring process.
So I had to prepare the interview.
>>So I had to prepare for the interview.
When I interviewed, the interviewer ask that I already known.
>>When I had the interview, the interviewer asked what I already know.
In the result I passed.
>>As a result, I passed.
Thank you for my God.
>>Correct!
When I need a help, he fills.
>>When I need help he fills me in.
It is unforgettable event.
>>It is an unforgettable event.
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