Unforgettable experience

I had an unpleasant experience the other day. My friends and I decided to go hiking in the mountain on Sunday and we were excited to go up to the top. But it was not as easy as we had expected and we were having a hard time. Finally we were able to reach the top. And I felt very proud of myself making it to the top. After a while on my back. I acciently twisted and fell down. I sprained my ankle. I didn't know what to do. Luckily one of my friends was willing to carry men his back to the emergency room. Finally I ended up getting my leg plastered. I had an unforgettable experience the other day. My family decide to travel around Europe for summer vacation and we were very excited. When we arrived at the airport and got ready to check in. I realized that I left my passport at home.I felt really frustrated with myself but had to go back home to get it. In orderto go faster, I grabbed a taxi and I did my best to make it to the airport.

Hi Sophia!! ^_^ You really are very patient and willing to make compositions. You\'re doing great with it. I provided you some corrections on some of your sentences. See you in class. Take care! ^_^ __Teacher Nica__     I had an unpleasant experience the other day. >> Correct! My friends and I decided to go hiking in the mountain on Sunday and we were excited to go up to the top. >> My friends and I decided to go hiking last Sunday and were excited to climb the top. But it was not as easy as we had expected and we were having a hard time. >> But it was not as easy as we had expected and we had a hard time. Finally we were able to reach the top. >> Correct! And I felt very proud of myself making it to the top. >> Correct! After a while on my back. I acciently twisted and fell down. >> After a while I accidentally twisted my back and fell down. I sprained my ankle. >> Correct! I didn\'t know what to do. >> Correct! Luckily one of my friends was willing to carry men his back to the emergency room. >> Luckily one of friends was willing to carry me on his back to the emergency room. Finally I ended up getting my leg plastered. >> Correct! I had an unforgettable experience the other day. >> Correct! My family decide to travel around Europe for summer vacation and we were very excited. >> Correct! When we arrived at the airport and got ready to check in.  I realized that I left my passport at home. >> When we arrived at the airposrt and was ready to check in I realized I left my passport at home. I felt really frustrated with myself but had to go back home to get it. >> Correct! In order to go faster, I grabbed a taxi and I did my best to make it to the airport. >> Correct!