Unfortunately, I\'ve never get some chocolate from student status...
학생이 쓴 원문
But I gave it to someone. On Valentine\'s Day, I gave my dad the best chocolate, and I put a bag of money wrapped in a large piece of chocolate, then wrapped the chocolate with the money and put it in a box. My dad seemed disappointed because he thought he had just given him a big chocolate, but he was surprised when he ate the chocolate. Someday, when I grow up, I\'ll get it from any student. Hmm...Maybe...?
강사 첨삭
Hi Maria!
I am sure that you will get some chocolates from your students when you become a teacher or a mentor. After all, you work so hard and so well.
Let us discuss this in class tomorrow. If we were near from each other, I will give you a gift that will make you smile a lot!
Catch you soon!
-T. Donna =)
>> I gave it to someone.
On Valentine\'s Day, I gave my dad the best chocolate, and I put a bag of money wrapped in a large piece of chocolate, then wrapped the chocolate with the money and put it in a box.
>> Correct!
My dad seemed disappointed because he thought he had just given him a big chocolate, but he was surprised when he ate the chocolate.
>> Correct!
Someday, when I grow up, I\'ll get it from any student. Hmm...Maybe...?
>> Correct!
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