uni 5. homework

2023-03-06 · 첨삭 강사 Lexie

학생이 쓴 원문

pediatrician: When I seven years old, My dream was pediatrician. helpful: NCT is helpful my life. professional: I want to professional job when I grow up. healthy: He is healthy man. dentist: The dentist was scared.

강사 첨삭

Hello, Liu!

Thank you for accomplishing your homework! Writing some sentences in English also contribute to your constant practice. Stay positive, work hard, and success will be knocking on your door. Keep up the good work! I believe in you. See you in class!

~ T. Lexie

pediatrician: When I seven years old, My dream was pediatrician.
>> When I was 7 years old, my dream was to be a pediatrician.
helpful: NCT is helpful my life.
>> NCT is helpful in my life.
professional: I want to professional job when I grow up.
>> I want to be have a professional job when I grow up.
healthy: He is healthy man.
>> He is healthy man.
dentist: The dentist was scared.
>> GRAMMATICALLY CORRECT!
OR >> The dentist was scary. (If you meant you were afraid of the dentist.)

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