Uniforms change according to the jobs.
학생이 쓴 원문
Uniform means clothes that wear in the group. Like school uniforms, we wear them in the group called \'school\'. The same is true with the company. So I think it\'s better to wear company uniforms. However, the uniforms can be different. In the factories, we have to wear comfortable uniforms. In conclusion, uniforms change according to the jobs.
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Uniform means clothes that wear in the group.
>> Uniform means clothes worn by a group.
Like school uniforms, we wear them in the group called \'school\'.
>> We wear a uniform to be part of a school.
The same is true with the company.
>> This is the same in companies.
So I think it\'s better to wear company uniforms.
>> Therefore, I think it\'s better to wear company uniforms.
However, the uniforms can be different.
>> This is a good sentence.
In the factories, we have to wear comfortable uniforms.
>> In factories, people have to wear comfortable uniforms.
In conclusion, uniforms change according to the jobs.
>> In conclusion, uniforms vary according to people\'s jobs.
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