Uniforms may have a detrimental effect on students’ self-image
학생이 쓴 원문
If students have good physical appearance, only little influence the uniforms would have.
If uniforms are neat enough, it also could have good effect to students\' self-image.
Many students dress like adults, not a student, and it doesn\'t look good actually.
강사 첨삭
Hey there, Ms. [이름]! Thank you for sharing your thoughts on uniforms and students\' appearances. You make some interesting points about the impact of physical appearance and how uniforms can contribute positively to self-image.
~T. Jenna
If students have good physical appearance, only little influence the uniforms would have.
>> If students have a good physical appearance, uniforms would have little influence.
OR
>> The impact of uniforms would be minimal if students already possess a good physical appearance.
If uniforms are neat enough, it also could have good effect to students\' self-image.
>>If uniforms are neat enough, those could also have a positive effect on students\' self-image.
>>If uniforms are neat enough, those could also have a positive effect on students\' self-image.
OR
>> If uniforms are kept spick and span, they can also work wonders for students\' self-image.
Many students dress like adults, not a student, and it doesn\'t look good actually.
>>Many students dress more like adults than students, and it doesn\'t actually look good.
OR
>>Many students dress in a way that resembles adults rather than students, and it doesn\'t present a good image.
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