unit 10. homework
학생이 쓴 원문
pocket money: I get once a month a pocket money.
future: My future will be fine.
important: Pocket money is very important.
saving: Saving money is a good action. Because when I want buy some thing, I\'ll buy some thing to saving money.
unnecessary: That\'s unnecessary thing!
강사 첨삭
Hello, Liu!
Thank you for accomplishing your homework! Writing some sentences in English also contribute to your constant practice. Stay positive, work hard, and success will be knocking on your door. Keep up the good work! I believe in you. See you in class!
~ T. Lexie
pocket money: I get once a month a pocket money.
>> I get a pocket money once a month.
future: My future will be fine.
>> Good!
important: Pocket money is very important.
>> Good!
saving: Saving money is a good action. Because when I want buy some thing, I\'ll buy some thing to saving money.
>> Saving money is a good action because when I want to buy something, I can buy it using my savings.
unnecessary: That\'s unnecessary thing!
>> That\'s an unnecessary thing!
future: My future will be fine.
>> Good!
important: Pocket money is very important.
>> Good!
saving: Saving money is a good action. Because when I want buy some thing, I\'ll buy some thing to saving money.
>> Saving money is a good action because when I want to buy something, I can buy it using my savings.
unnecessary: That\'s unnecessary thing!
>> That\'s an unnecessary thing!
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