unit 12.
학생이 쓴 원문
I see my self as a senior flight attendant in your company five years from now.
I hope to move forward in my career and get a promotion.
Maybe I will have broadened my horizon and gained enouth experiance.
I'd able to achieve it by handle greater responsbilities and patient.
It would be a real honor to come and work for you ~~~
강사 첨삭
Hello there..
Its great to know that you have a very good writing skill, I commend you for a job well done..;0)
Just continue what youre doing and you will be much better in no time..
T.Lynn
I see my self as a senior flight attendant in your company five years from now.>>correct!I hope to move forward in my career and get a promotion.>>correct!Maybe I will have broadened my horizon and gained enouth experiance.>>Maybe I will have broadened my horizon and gained enough experience.I'd able to achieve it by handle greater responsbilities and patient.>>I will be able to achieve it through patience and by handling enough responsibilitiesIt would be a real honor to come and work for you ~~~ >>It would be a great honor to come and work for you..
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