Unit 4
학생이 쓴 원문
Please make a creative composition on "Can a good teacher influence how well you enjoy learning a language? Explain your answer"
I think a good teacher can influence people who want to enjoy learning a language.
The important thing here is how much we can enjoy learning language. As we know that it's hard to learn foreign languages. So, the classes should be more fun and excited in order to be not getting sick of learning easily. A teacher plays an important role in the class accordingly. Therefore, I think it should be a good listener to students like a friend. Students also should pledge to teacher their loyalty, skill, fortitude, and concentration.
In addition, It's very important what subject learning. Also, it has big differences between languages and many other subjects. Learning language needs patience and will power more than others. So, if someone has a good teacher, it will be helpful to students who want to learn languages.
강사 첨삭
Hello there, Loan!
Wow! another splendid composition. Thank you so much for your answer. Please review on my corrections below. I hope this tips could help you in improving your English skills. Just remember, motivation is a way to give new meaning to your aspiration so that you can fulfill what you desired in life. Remember your courage is the big key to your success. See you later!
Here are my corrections.
T. Kate^^
Instruction: Please make a creative composition on \"Can a good teacher influence how well you enjoy learning a language? Explain your answer\">> CorrectI think a good teacher can influence people who want to enjoy learning a language.>> Correct
>> OR I think a good teacher can influence people who want to enjoy learning a new language.
The important thing here is how much we can enjoy learning language.
>> Correct
As we know that it\'s hard to learn foreign languages.
>> Correct (Nice sentence)
>> As we all know it\'s really hard to learn foreign languages.
So, the classes should be more fun and excited in order to be not getting sick of learning easily.
>> So, the classes should be more fun and exciting in order for the student to enjoy the class and not to feel bored of learning. (Please take note on the sentence structuring)
A teacher plays an important role in the class accordingly.
>> Correct (Great job!)
Therefore, I think it should be a good listener to students like a friend.
>> Therefore, I think a student should be a good listener to like a friend. (Better)
Students also should pledge to teacher their loyalty, skill, fortitude, and concentration.>> Students should also pledge their teacher for their loyalty, skill, fortitude, and concentration. (Great Sentence)In addition, It\'s very important what subject learning.
>> In addition, it\'s very important to know what subject to learn or study.
Also, it has big differences between languages and many other subjects.
>> Correct
>> Also, it has a big difference between languages and many other subjects.
Learning language needs patience and will power more than others.
>> Correct (Well said)
So, if someone has a good teacher, it will be helpful to students who want to learn languages.
>> Correct
>> So, if someone has a good teacher, it will be helpful to students who want to learn new languages. (EXCELLENT JOB!)
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