Unit5. Homework

2023-11-13 · 첨삭 강사 Julia

학생이 쓴 원문

I\'m say this. Stop smoking for your health. Smoking is harmful to your health and it\'s addictive. If you want to have healthy lungs, a clear mind and clean skin, quit smoking right now. I\'m late this homework. I\'m very busy last week^^;; Actually I forgot. . .

강사 첨삭

Hi, Serah! Thank you so much for answering your homework. Please take note of the corrections I made on your sentences. Keep it up! Thank you as well for leaving positive feedbacks on the website for me. I appreciate it so much. See you in class! ^^
- T. Julia
I\'m say this.
>> I\'m saying this.
Stop smoking for your health.
>> Correct
OR >> Stop smoking for the sake of your health.
Smoking is harmful to your health and it\'s addictive.
>> Correct
If you want to have healthy lungs, a clear mind and clean skin, quit smoking right now.
>> Correct

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