university

Hi there, Ms. [이름]!

Thanks for your composition! Your daughter must be worried about her university admission. I hope she\'ll get admitted soon. Take care and have a good day!

T. JanE ^^

HI, teacher, Jane.

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My daughter went to grandmother in house last week.

>> My daughter went to her grandmother\'s house last week. 

She has a lot of troubles these days.

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It is dangerous because the University cut-line registered in the application is high.

>> The quota of registration in the university is really tight. 

If you are out of school have to make a mistake.

>> She must not make a mistake about her application. 

But grandmother objected to her misfortune.

>> Her grandmother objected to her misfortune. 

Maybe she wants to go to University of her choice.

>> Maybe she wants to go to a university of her choice. 

We hope luck to pass.

>> We hope for good luck for her to pass. 

Goodbye~^^

>> Correct