University education
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Hi [이름] my dear,
I always believe that education is not based on what school or university you're studying at but on what kind of a person you'll become.
Here are some corrections.
Teacher Camille
Yes It is true that some students'university education is chosen by the parent of the student.
>> It is true that some students' university education/university course is chosen by the parent of the student.
Since high school student doesn't know what they can do well and what major is promising , their parents give them advice from their experience.
>>Since most high school students weren't aware of what they can do well and what major is promising , their parents give them advice from their experience.
But I think that stuents should choice their major by themselves.
>>But I think that students should choose their major themselves.
In my case , I chose my major by myself.
>>In my case , I chose my major myself.
Looking back to that time , l made a mistake on choosing major.
>>Looking back, I think I've made a mistake on choosing major.
I chose it just by its name which had environment in it.
>>I have chosen my major based on the name alone.
Eventually I dropped out of that univ. and entered a community college.
>>Eventually I dropped out of that University and continued studying in a community colloge.
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