university students should be required to attend classes
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I agree that going to classes should be optional for students.
University student no more teenager. They already fully grow up, and should take responsibility for their decision. If he/she really don't want to take that class, she/he can skip it unless he/she can take all the risk from that decision, such as can't follow up the class, or get a bed grade.
Thanks for the students who skip their class frequently, diligent students are able to get a great grade. lol :)
If student who don't want to take class, they just interrupt other student. If he/she have not a good mood or condition to take class, I think passing the class might better for he/she and others.
These are the reasons why I agree that going to classes should be optional for students.
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Thank you for your valuable opinion about our essay topic. ^^ Now, most of the corrections were done to improve fluentness and articulacy. Notice though in the second and third correction, that there are words where they were shortened (i.e. \"do not\" and \"thank you\"). This is usually done to put emphasis and to make a point. ~~~
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I agree that going to classes should be optional for students.>> CORRECT
University student no more teenager. They already fully grow up, and should take responsibility for their decision. If he/she really don\'t want to take that class, she/he can skip it unless he/she can take all the risk from that decision, such as can\'t follow up the class, or get a bed grade. >> University students are no longer teenagers. They are already fully grown and should take responsibility for their decisions. If there are students who absolutely do not want to attend a class, they could skip it, fully knowing the risk of that decision like not being able to keep up with the class and getting a bad grade.
Thanks for the students who skip their class frequently, diligent students are able to get a great grade. lol :)>> Thank you to the students who skip classes frequently because diligent students are able to get great grades, LOL :)
If student who don\'t want to take class, they just interrupt other student. If he/she have not a good mood or condition to take class, I think passing the class might better for he/she and others.>> Students who don\'t want to attend class usually end up interrupting other students. If they are not in the mood to have class, I think that cutting class would be better for them and for others.
These are the reasons why I agree that going to classes should be optional for students.
>> These are the reasons why I agree that going to class should be optional for students.
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