Urgency composition
학생이 쓴 원문
Dear [Name]. [Name] morning!
I have some questions about IC reconcilrations in Bellin.
I already uploaded IC open invoices in Bellin yesterday using Cha's ID.
But I cannot log in Bellin today using Cha's ID and I cannot see IC balance in Bellin.
Cha's ID is no longer valid.
Kindly please provide an information about the solution.
And Please give me a ID for log in Bellin.
Are there IC open data still in Bellin that I uploaded in Bellin yesterday using Cha's ID?
Please give me a information if IC open data was deleted I will upload again.
I'm looking forward for your relply.
Thank you.
강사 첨삭
Hi there my dear Bella! I really appreciate your writing.
You did a great job. Most of your sentences are correct, so keep up the good work!
T.Cam
Dear [Name]. [Name]>>CorrectGood morning!>>CorrectI have some questions about IC reconcilrations in Bellin.>>I have some questions about IC reconciliations in Bellin.I already uploaded IC open invoices in Bellin yesterday using Cha's ID.>>correctBut I cannot log in Bellin today using Cha's ID and I cannot see IC balance in Bellin.>>But I couldnt log into Bellin today using Cha's ID and I couldnt even see the IC balance in Bellin.Cha's ID is no longer valid.>>CorrectKindly please provide an information about the solution.>>CorrectAnd Please give me a ID for log in Bellin.>>And please give me an ID for my log in to Bellin.Are there IC open data still in Bellin that I uploaded in Bellin yesterday using Cha's ID?>>Is the IC open data that I uploaded in Bellin yesterday using Cha’s ID still there? Please give me a information if IC open data was deleted I will upload again.>>Please tell me if the IC open data was already deleted, so that I can upload again.I'm looking forward for your relply.>>I’m looking forward to your reply.Thank you.
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