Urgency composition

2011-04-01 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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Dear [Name]. [Name] morning! I have some questions about IC reconcilrations in Bellin. I already uploaded IC open invoices in Bellin yesterday using Cha's ID. But I cannot log in Bellin today using Cha's ID and I cannot see IC balance in Bellin. Cha's ID is no longer valid. Kindly please provide an information about the solution. And Please give me a ID for log in Bellin. Are there IC open data still in Bellin that I uploaded in Bellin yesterday using Cha's ID? Please give me a information if IC open data was deleted I will upload again. I'm looking forward for your relply. Thank you.

강사 첨삭

Hi there my dear Bella! I really appreciate your writing. You did a great job. Most of your sentences are correct, so keep up the good work! T.Cam   Dear [Name]. [Name]>>CorrectGood morning!>>CorrectI have some questions about IC reconcilrations in Bellin.>>I have some questions about IC reconciliations in Bellin.I already uploaded IC open invoices in Bellin yesterday using Cha's ID.>>correctBut I cannot log in Bellin today using Cha's ID and I cannot see IC balance in Bellin.>>But I couldnt log into Bellin today using Cha's ID and I couldnt even see the IC balance in Bellin.Cha's ID is no longer valid.>>CorrectKindly please provide an information about the solution.>>CorrectAnd Please give me a ID for log in Bellin.>>And please give me an ID for my log in to Bellin.Are there IC open data still in Bellin that I uploaded in Bellin yesterday using Cha's ID?>>Is the IC open data that I uploaded in Bellin  yesterday using Cha’s ID still there? Please give me a information if IC open data was deleted I will upload again.>>Please tell me if the IC open data was already deleted, so that I can upload again.I'm looking forward for your relply.>>I’m looking forward to your reply.Thank you. >>correct

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