Use at least 2 to 3 short paragraphs to describe your best and worst experiences at work.

2022-08-11 · 첨삭 강사 Raven

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First, the best experience that I\'ve been working is to receive gifts from passengers. Especially, I guess it was most rewarding when the kids gave me gifts. On the other hand, the worst experience was going into a fuel tank to clean up. It smelled bad and it was hard to breathe.

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Great job Elic! Thank you once again for taking the time to answer/do your homework today. I know you have other things to do, but you still gone out of your way to do your homework, and for that I want to say thank you. Awesome job, by the way! Keep it up! :)


First, the best experience that I\'ve been working is to receive gifts from passengers.
>> The best experience I\'ve ever had at work was when I received gifts from passengers.
Especially, I guess it was most rewarding when the kids gave me gifts.
>> It was especially rewarding when the kids gave me gifts.
On the other hand, the worst experience was going into a fuel tank to clean up.
>> On the other hand, the worst experience I had was going into a fuel tank to clean it up. 
It smelled bad and it was hard to breathe.
>> Correct. OR It smelt bad and it was hard to breathe.

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