Use my know-how
학생이 쓴 원문
In fact, every bad experience was eventually beautified and left some of lessons and realizations.
Thus, I want to focus on best experiences of acceptance that I\'m having in my worklife.
I\'m used to establishing strategies, researching the markets and drawing some insights by working at a strategic consulting firm before.
Whenever I participate in team meeting, I suggest my opinions using know-how which is gotten in previous experiences.
For example, when I claim the opinion related to entering into new market, I comment partnerships, support policies and expected effects.
This approach was often accepted among team members and I was in charge of setting an entire storyline of strategy.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Ms. [Name] [이름]! Your ability to turn challenges into valuable lessons is inspiring. Your strategic approach in team meetings based on past experiences is making a real impact. Keep up the great work!
~T. Jenna
>>In fact, every bad experience is eventually beautified and leaves some lessons and realizations.
OR
>>In fact, every bad experience can eventually be seen as a valuable lesson, leaving us with realizations.
Thus, I want to focus on best experiences of acceptance that I\'m having in my worklife.
Thus, I want to focus on best experiences of acceptance that I\'m having in my worklife.
Correct, or
>>Therefore, I aim to emphasize the best experiences of acceptance that I am encountering in my professional life.
I\'m used to establishing strategies, researching the markets and drawing some insights by working at a strategic consulting firm before.
I\'m used to establishing strategies, researching the markets and drawing some insights by working at a strategic consulting firm before.
Correct, or
>>Prior to this, I honed my skills in strategy establishment, market research, and insight generation during my tenure at a strategic consulting firm.
Whenever I participate in team meeting, I suggest my opinions using know-how which is gotten in previous experiences.
Whenever I participate in team meeting, I suggest my opinions using know-how which is gotten in previous experiences.
>>Whenever I participate in team meetings, I suggest my opinions using the know-how acquired from previous experiences.
OR
>>During team meetings, I contribute by offering insights gleaned from my past experiences, enriching our discussions with valuable know-how.
For example, when I claim the opinion related to entering into new market, I comment partnerships, support policies and expected effects.
For example, when I claim the opinion related to entering into new market, I comment partnerships, support policies and expected effects.
>>For example, when I express an opinion regarding entering a new market, I address partnerships, support policies, and expected effects.
This approach was often accepted among team members and I was in charge of setting an entire storyline of strategy.
This approach was often accepted among team members and I was in charge of setting an entire storyline of strategy.
>>This approach is often accepted among team members, and I am in charge of setting the entire storyline of the strategy.
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