Use of English

2020-12-14 · 첨삭 강사 Sharon

학생이 쓴 원문

I have nothing to use English in my daily life now. Until last year, I needed to use a little English in abroad travel situations. When I\'m lost there, when I have to buy souvenirs, and when I want to know how to get to my destination. In these circumstances I think I needed to use English. I am upset that I can not travel because of COVID19 in this year. I am looking forward to going on a trip abroad next year and using English. In fact, the purpose that I study English is for my vision. I am sure I will use English fluently on abroad in a few years.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름] Ha!

Please take note of the corrections below.

Focus on verb tenses and prepositions

They may be confusing rules so practice some more.

Thank you for your hard work.^^

~~ Teacher Sharon

I have nothing to use English in my daily life now.

>> I have nowhere to use English in my daily life now.
Until last year, I needed to use a little English in abroad travel situations.

>> Correct
When I\'m lost there, when I have to buy souvenirs, and when I want to know how to get to my destination.

>> I used the language when I got lost there, when I had to buy souvenirs, and when I wanted to know how to get to my destination.
In these circumstances I think I needed to use English.

>> Correct
I am upset that I can not travel because of COVID19 in this year.

>> I am upset that I can not travel because of COVID19 this year.
I am looking forward to going on a trip abroad next year and using English.

>> Correct
In fact, the purpose that I study English is for my vision.

>> In fact, my purpose in studying English is for my vision.
I am sure I will use English fluently on abroad in a few years.

>> I am sure I will use English fluently abroad in a few years.

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