use of the phone
학생이 쓴 원문
For me, talking on the phone is about most of the work in school.
I think I\'m talking more than 20 calls a day on the phone at school.
I am busy and tired so that I don\'t want to talk on the phone to anyone like my family or my friends.
So I rarely call my family and my friends but they often call me.
However, I\'d rather see and talk to them in person.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름] Ha!
I like the patterns you used in this composition.
They are very clear and commonly used in conversations.
Keep up the good work!^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
For me, talking on the phone is about most of the work in school.
>> For me, I talk on the phone mostly about work.
I think I\'m talking more than 20 calls a day on the phone at school.
I think I\'m talking more than 20 calls a day on the phone at school.
>> I think I take more than 20 calls a day on the phone at school.
I am busy and tired so that I don\'t want to talk on the phone to anyone like my family or my friends.
I am busy and tired so that I don\'t want to talk on the phone to anyone like my family or my friends.
>> Correct
So I rarely call my family and my friends but they often call me.
So I rarely call my family and my friends but they often call me.
>> Correct
However, I\'d rather see and talk to them in person.
However, I\'d rather see and talk to them in person.
>> Correct
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