Use \"scenery\" and \"visit\" in correct sentences.
학생이 쓴 원문
Everyone can’t visit few tourist attractions known as cherry blossom scenery because the government officially has blocked for 2 years to avoid group infection from covid 19.
강사 첨삭
Hi Judy!
This is one long, very good sentence! There were only a few suggestions I made with some insertion of the article \"the\" and capitalization of \"COVID 19\".
I am grateful for this homework answer. Keep up the good work!
Be happy this weekend! ^^
-T. Donna =)
>> Everyone can’t visit the tourist attraction known as \"Cherry Blossom\" scenery because the government has officially blocked for 2 years to avoid group infection from COVID 19.
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