Use the folling words in a sentence.
학생이 쓴 원문
1.When I was studying in English sometimes, frustrated in my mind.
2.I have Apple device 3 items.
3.Let’s proceed our piano lesson.
4.I have objective on my life plan.
5.My mom’s previous life was not easy for her because, my brother was sick for a long time.
6.When I was 59 years old of age I retired, now my life is easy for me.
7.When I went to the trip connecting flight was not easy.
8.The Autumn is coming soon,by the time ripe tree is falling down.
9.I live in Yongin which is suburb area but I love my place.
10.I go out exercise every night after then my outfit always drenched.
강사 첨삭
You might ask why there are no correct answers. Well, there are but some unnecessary words made your sentences a bit confusing that is why I put better forms for it. :) We will talk about this tomorrow, don\'t worry!
Hope this helps! ^^
- Teacher Debbie
>> I get frustrated sometimes whenever I study English.
2.I have Apple device 3 items.
2.I have Apple device 3 items.
>> I have 3 Apple devices.
3.Let’s proceed our piano lesson.
3.Let’s proceed our piano lesson.
>> Let’s proceed to our piano lesson.
4.I have objective on my life plan.
4.I have objective on my life plan.
>> I have objectives for my life.
5.My mom’s previous life was not easy for her because, my brother was sick for a long time.
5.My mom’s previous life was not easy for her because, my brother was sick for a long time.
>> My mom’s earlier life was not easy for her because my brother was sick for a long time.
6.When I was 59 years old of age I retired, now my life is easy for me.
6.When I was 59 years old of age I retired, now my life is easy for me.
>> I retired when I was 59 years old. Now, my life is easier.
7.When I went to the trip connecting flight was not easy.
7.When I went to the trip connecting flight was not easy.
>> When I went on a trip, the connecting flight wasn\'t easy.
8.The Autumn is coming soon,by the time ripe tree is falling down.
8.The Autumn is coming soon,by the time ripe tree is falling down.
>> The autumn season is coming season, by that time the tree leaves will fall down.
9.I live in Yongin which is suburb area but I love my place.
9.I live in Yongin which is suburb area but I love my place.
>> I live in Yongin which is a suburb area but I love my place.
10.I go out exercise every night after then my outfit always drenched.
10.I go out exercise every night after then my outfit always drenched.
>> My outfit always get drenched whenever I exercise.
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