Use the following words in a sentence:
학생이 쓴 원문
1. Culture; When we learn foreign languages, we need to learn the culture which the languages are based on to immerse ourselves into them.
2. Popular: BTS, my favorite boys\' band, is so popular that they have become now celebrity world widely.
3. Confectioner; Korean Confectioners are striving to reach their businesses up to the end of the world.
4. Overseas; Because of the pandemic, we haven’t been on a trip overseas for less than 2 years, but now each country starts to open for overseas travelers
5. Industry; Our world had been changed after the Industry Revolution in history. After that, we started mass manufacturing, and trade was boomed between countries.
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>> Culture: When we learn foreign languages, we also need to learn their culture for us to immerse.
2. Popular: BTS, my favorite boys\' band, is so popular that they have become now celebrity world widely.
>> BTS, my favorite boy band, is so popular that they are now a global sensation.
3. Confectioner; Korean Confectioners are striving to reach their businesses up to the end of the world.
>> Korean confectioners are striving for their business to be known worldwide.
4. Overseas; Because of the pandemic, we haven’t been on a trip overseas for less than 2 years, but now each country starts to open for overseas travelers
>> The pandemic restricted us to travel overseas for almost two years, but now, countries are already opening international flights and are already accepting travelers.
5. Industry; Our world had been changed after the Industry Revolution in history. After that, we started mass manufacturing, and trade was boomed between countries.
>> Our world changed because of the Industrial Revolution that happen in the past which started a boom in mass manufacturing and trading industry.
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