use the following words in a sentence.
학생이 쓴 원문
1.Korea is developing way high quality cosmetic field.
2.Korea population is diminishing slowly.
3.I love flower’s fragrant.
4.You can find peace and serenity in the woods.
5.We live in the world with mobile app.
6.The USA have lot of social occasion.
7.Nowaday the Korea and Japan have trade war that is very tense.
8.The rainy weather is I feel really calm and peaceful.
9.The series narrates Steve Job’s entire life.
10.These days people got debt from credit card.
강사 첨삭
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- Teacher Debbie
>> correct
2. Korea population is diminishing slowly.
2. Korea population is diminishing slowly.
>> Korea\'s population is diminishing slowly.
3. I love flower’s fragrant.
3. I love flower’s fragrant.
>> I love the flower\'s fragrance.
4. You can find peace and serenity in the woods.
4. You can find peace and serenity in the woods.
>> correct
5. We live in the world with mobile app.
5. We live in the world with mobile app.
>> correct
6.The USA have lot of social occasion.
6.The USA have lot of social occasion.
>> The USA has a lot of social occasions.
7. Nowaday the Korea and Japan have trade war that is very tense.
7. Nowaday the Korea and Japan have trade war that is very tense.
>> Nowadays, Korea and Japan has a very tense trade war.
8. The rainy weather is I feel really calm and peaceful.
8. The rainy weather is I feel really calm and peaceful.
>> The rainy weather makes me feel really calm and peaceful.
9. The series narrates Steve Job’s entire life.
9. The series narrates Steve Job’s entire life.
>> correct
10. These days people got debt from credit card.
10. These days people got debt from credit card.
>> These days, people get debt mostly from credit cards.
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