Use the following words in a sentence.
학생이 쓴 원문
1.The campaign will run from Aug 1 to Aug 15.
2. I convinced my mom come to Korea.
3.Someone has a short temper that is not good.
4. My brother is a gambler.
5.When I had been Europe trip that time I met many nice crew members.
6.I saw many luxury tour bus in Seoul.
7. I am watching my weight for reason my health issue.
8.I am boast of my children.
9.Korea taxi fare is high.
10, My father passed away 16 years ago I sobbed a lot.
강사 첨삭
T[이름]k you for being creative with your sentences. You did great ^^
- Teacher Debbie
>> correct
2. I convinced my mom come to Korea.
2. I convinced my mom come to Korea.
>> I convinced my mom to come to Korea.
3.Someone has a short temper that is not good.
3.Someone has a short temper that is not good.
>> Someone who has a short temper is not good.
4. My brother is a gambler.
4. My brother is a gambler.
>> correct
5.When I had been Europe trip that time I met many nice crew members.
5.When I had been Europe trip that time I met many nice crew members.
>> When I went to Europe, I met many nice crew members.
6.I saw many luxury tour bus in Seoul.
6.I saw many luxury tour bus in Seoul.
>> I saw a lot of luxurious tour buses in Seoul.
7. I am watching my weight for reason my health issue.
7. I am watching my weight for reason my health issue.
>> I am watching my health due to my health issues.
8.I am boast of my children.
8.I am boast of my children.
>> I always boast about my children.
9.Korea taxi fare is high.
9.Korea taxi fare is high.
>> Korea\'s taxi fare is high.
10, My father passed away 16 years ago I sobbed a lot.
10, My father passed away 16 years ago I sobbed a lot.
>> I sobbed a lot when my father passed away 16 years ago.
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