use the following words in a sentence.
학생이 쓴 원문
1.Many tourist are coming from SEA to Korea that sign is good.
2. I like listening better t[이름] talking especially when we getting older we have to listen from someone.
3. My daughter -in law has many follower on You tube.
4.I check my homework after I finish it.
5. If I visit my son’s place ,I don’t ’ need permission because I have a special key.
6. My husband sleeps little later t[이름] me.
7.my husband and I to do something we got remind each other because our brain is not puction well.
8.My blood pressure is low but not to seriously.
9.We have to think proper
10.Food is essential our life.
강사 첨삭
More practice and I am certain that you will get the [이름]g of writing sentences in American style hehe ^^;
T[이름]k you, [이름]nah!~
- Teacher Debbie
1.Many tourist are coming from SEA to Korea that sign is good.
>> Many tourists are coming from SEA to Korea which is a good sign.
2. I like listening better t[이름] talking especially when we getting older we have to listen from someone.
2. I like listening better t[이름] talking especially when we getting older we have to listen from someone.
>> I like listening better t[이름] talking especially because we are getting older so, we have to listen to someone.
3. My daughter -in law has many follower on You tube.
3. My daughter -in law has many follower on You tube.
>> followers
4.I check my homework after I finish it.
4.I check my homework after I finish it.
>> correct
5. If I visit my son’s place ,I don’t ’ need permission because I have a special key.
5. If I visit my son’s place ,I don’t ’ need permission because I have a special key.
>> correct
6. My husband sleeps little later t[이름] me.
6. My husband sleeps little later t[이름] me.
>> correct
7.my husband and I to do something we got remind each other because our brain is not puction well.
7.my husband and I to do something we got remind each other because our brain is not puction well.
>> My husband and I have to remind each other if we have something to do because our brains does not function well anymore.
8.My blood pressure is low but not to seriously.
8.My blood pressure is low but not to seriously.
>> My blood pressure is low but it is not a serious thing.
9.We have to think proper
9.We have to think proper
>> We have to think properly.
10.Food is essential our life.
>> Food is essential to our life.
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