Use the following words in sentences

2022-11-16 · 첨삭 강사 Raven

학생이 쓴 원문

1. How about my proposal? 2. Please get your ideas presented to me. 3. Let\'s see our new work schedule. 4. I will get my idea innovative. 5. An easy is a greater threat to progress than hardship.

강사 첨삭

Hey there, Elic! Great job with this homework. I can see that you\'ve tried your best to innovate the sentences you presented. Thank you for doing so. Review my corrections carefully and try to think about the patterns I used in the alternative sentences. Again, thank you and have a great day ahead!

- Teacher Raven 

1. How about my proposal?
>> Correct.
2. Please get your ideas presented to me.
>> Please get your ideas and present to me.
3. Let\'s see our new work schedule.
>> Correct.
4. I will get my idea innovative.
>> I will make my ideas innovative.
5. An easy is a greater threat to progress than hardship.
>> Taking the easy way is a greater threat to progress than hardship.

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