Use the following words in sentences

2022-12-07 · 첨삭 강사 Raven

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1. As our diet becomes westernized, we can see lots of obese people these days. 2. It\'s not like I\'m unhealthy. 3. There\'re obvious continuities between diet and health. 4. I will take a spend a lazy afternoon. 5. How often do you exercise?

강사 첨삭

Hi there Elic. Good job in u[이름]g the words in these sentences. As you may noticed, I replace some sentence patterns especially with 1 and 3. But aside from those the other items you did were very good. Please review my corrections carefully. Thank you and have a great day!

- Teacher Raven :)

1. As our diet becomes westernized, we can see lots of obese people these days.
>> A lot of obese people can be seen these days as our diets become westernized.
2. It\'s not like I\'m unhealthy.
>> Correct.
3. There\'re obvious continuities between diet and health.
>> Correct. OR Obviously, there is some relation between diet and health.
4. I will take a spend a lazy afternoon.
>> I will spend my afternoon lazily.
5. How often do you exercise?
>> Correct.

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