Use the words in a sentence

2021-06-24 · 첨삭 강사 Faith

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1. enrichment I prefer enrichment of travel as possible as. I need good accommodations, convenient transportation when traveling. Because resting during traveling make me energized to enjoy entirely the travel. 2. sculptures I enjoy watching art sculptures. I love to entry a museum. However, because of virus, I can\'t often go that. For going that, I have to visit on not busy time getting a KF94 mask tightly. Because the closed places like museum are fragile for spreading the virus I hope I enjoy conveniently after I get vaccinated. 3. inspiring Strange cities are inspiring for me. So l love to visit them. However, after the pandemic, I can\'t visit a city of other nations. For the skillful disinfection of Korea, I can visit other city of Korea, I have to be satisfied now.

강사 첨삭

You are amazing, [이름]! I am really delighted to see your long sentences. I am proud of you for doing that!- Faith-
1. enrichment
>> CORRECT
I prefer enrichment of travel as possible as.
>> I prefer my enrichment when I travel as much as possible.
I need good accommodations, convenient transportation when traveling.
>> I need good accommodations and convenient transportation when traveling.
Because resting during traveling make me energized to enjoy entirely the travel.
>> Because relaxing while traveling makes me energized to enjoy entirely the travel.
2. sculptures
>> CORRECT
I enjoy watching art sculptures.
>> CORRECT
OR I am fascinated by art sculptures.
I love to entry a museum. 
>> I love to enter a museum. 
However, because of virus, I can\'t often go that.
>> However, because of virus, I can\'t often go there.
For going that, I have to visit on not busy time getting a KF94 mask tightly.
>> If I want to go there, I have to visit on unbusy time while wearing KF94 mask tightly.
Because the closed places like museum are fragile for spreading the virus
>> Because closed places like museums are prone to virus.
I hope I enjoy conveniently after I get vaccinated.
>> I hope I enjoy it conveniently after I get vaccinated.
3. inspiring
>> CORRECT
Strange cities are inspiring for me. 
So l love to visit them.
>> Strange cities are inspiring for me so l love to visit them.
However, after the pandemic, I can\'t visit a city of other nations.
>> However, after the pandemic, I still can\'t visit other nations.
For the skillful disinfection of Korea, I can visit other city of Korea, I have to be satisfied now.
>> Because of the skillful disinfection of Koreans, I can visit other cities here and I have to be satisfied now.

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