Use the words in a sentence
학생이 쓴 원문
1. enrichment
I prefer enrichment of travel as possible as.
I need good accommodations, convenient transportation when traveling.
Because resting during traveling make me energized to enjoy entirely the travel.
2. sculptures
I enjoy watching art sculptures.
I love to entry a museum. However, because of virus, I can\'t often go that.
For going that, I have to visit on not busy time getting a KF94 mask tightly.
Because the closed places like museum are fragile for spreading the virus
I hope I enjoy conveniently after I get vaccinated.
3. inspiring
Strange cities are inspiring for me. So l love to visit them.
However, after the pandemic, I can\'t visit a city of other nations.
For the skillful disinfection of Korea, I can visit other city of Korea, I have to be satisfied now.
강사 첨삭
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1. enrichment>> CORRECT
I prefer enrichment of travel as possible as.
I prefer enrichment of travel as possible as.
>> I prefer my enrichment when I travel as much as possible.
I need good accommodations, convenient transportation when traveling.
I need good accommodations, convenient transportation when traveling.
>> I need good accommodations and convenient transportation when traveling.
Because resting during traveling make me energized to enjoy entirely the travel.
Because resting during traveling make me energized to enjoy entirely the travel.
>> Because relaxing while traveling makes me energized to enjoy entirely the travel.
2. sculptures
2. sculptures
>> CORRECT
I enjoy watching art sculptures.
I enjoy watching art sculptures.
>> CORRECT
OR I am fascinated by art sculptures.
I love to entry a museum.
I love to entry a museum.
>> I love to enter a museum.
However, because of virus, I can\'t often go that.
>> However, because of virus, I can\'t often go there.
For going that, I have to visit on not busy time getting a KF94 mask tightly.
For going that, I have to visit on not busy time getting a KF94 mask tightly.
>> If I want to go there, I have to visit on unbusy time while wearing KF94 mask tightly.
Because the closed places like museum are fragile for spreading the virus
Because the closed places like museum are fragile for spreading the virus
>> Because closed places like museums are prone to virus.
I hope I enjoy conveniently after I get vaccinated.
I hope I enjoy conveniently after I get vaccinated.
>> I hope I enjoy it conveniently after I get vaccinated.
3. inspiring
3. inspiring
>> CORRECT
Strange cities are inspiring for me. So l love to visit them.
Strange cities are inspiring for me. So l love to visit them.
>> Strange cities are inspiring for me so l love to visit them.
However, after the pandemic, I can\'t visit a city of other nations.
>> However, after the pandemic, I still can\'t visit other nations.
For the skillful disinfection of Korea, I can visit other city of Korea, I have to be satisfied now.
For the skillful disinfection of Korea, I can visit other city of Korea, I have to be satisfied now.
>> Because of the skillful disinfection of Koreans, I can visit other cities here and I have to be satisfied now.
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