Use your imagination. How will people communicate in the future?
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In ancient times, people had to walk a long distance like a few hours or several days in some cases to convey a message or to meet others.
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The way of communication has changed thanks to advanced technologies.
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We used to depend on postal mails not long time ago until telephone was developed.
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And then, the mobile phone has been developed and emerged as a new means of communication.
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The mobile phone brought us a new world in which we can communicate with each other regardless of when it is or where we are.
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Now we can’t think of our life without the cell phone.
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In the past when there was no the mobile phone, there was no way we can reach out to someone who was on the move.
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It was a great revolution, although it has some negative aspects such as preventing people from seeking tranquility.
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How will people communicate in the future?
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This need for fast, flexible and diverse communication methods is likely to drive further changes in the future.
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