Using Internet charge
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In my country, destop internet charge is not expensive.
It\'s depend on telecome, I think under 20 dollars is average.
but, cellphone internet charge is very expensive.
4G internet is 70 dollars and 5G internet is all most 100 dollars.
It\'s too expensive to students.
So, Saving cahrge system is popular in Korea recently.
this system is launched unpoular telecomes.
It is more cheap than popular telecomes.
But this system can\'t use internet infinity. So, Using this system person are have to finding a wi-fi every where.
I using a expensive charge internet for cellphone so i can use internet everywhere and everytime kkk
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
I think it\'s the same in my country.
Wired internet are nit actually expensive, but smartphone internet cost more.
Anyhow, it\'s still good because we can use it to watch news and K-dramas hahaha.
Thank you!
In my country, destop internet charge is not expensive.
>>> Desktop internet fee is not expensive in Korea.
It\'s depend on telecome, I think under 20 dollars is average.
>>> It depends on the telecom, I think it\'s normal to pay under 20 dollars.
but, cellphone internet charge is very expensive.
>>> But the internet fee for cell phone is very expensive.
4G internet is 70 dollars and 5G internet is all most 100 dollars.
>>> The 4G Internet is 70 dollars and the 5G Internet is almost 100 dollars.
It\'s too expensive to students.
>>> It\'s too expensive for students.
So, Saving cahrge system is popular in Korea recently.
>>> So recently, the discount system is popular in Korea.
this system is launched unpoular telecomes.
>>> The system is launched by an unpopular telecoms.
It is more cheap than popular telecomes.
>>> It\'s cheaper than popular telecoms.
But this system can\'t use internet infinity.
>>> But this system has a limit.
So, Using this system person are have to finding a wi-fi every where.
>>> So people who use this system have to find Wi-Fi everywhere.
I using a expensive charge internet for cellphone so i can use internet everywhere and everytime kkk
>>> I can use the Internet anytime, anywhere by using the expensive internet on my phone.
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