using technology during dinner
학생이 쓴 원문
Do you think technology (TV, phones) should be allowed at the dinner table? Why or why not?
actually, I think when we have a dinner alone, we are allowed using technology.
but, with family or other people, I think we should better do not using that.
Because interaction with others is important to have a good relationship.
but we don\'t have a lot of time to interaction each other, so I think the time of dinner is perfect for that.
강사 첨삭
Hello there, Alice!
I think you make a great point! Dinner is one of the few times in the day when we can truly connect, so putting away our phones and talking to each other makes the meal more special. It helps build stronger relationships and create good memories!
- Kristine ^^
actually, I think when we have a dinner alone, we are allowed using technology.
>> Actually, I believe we are allowed to use technology during our solitary time for dinner.
but, with family or other people, I think we should better do not using that.
but, with family or other people, I think we should better do not using that.
>> But with family or other people, I think it’s better not to use it.
Because interaction with others is important to have a good relationship.
Because interaction with others is important to have a good relationship.
>> Because interacting with others is important for building good relationships.
but we don\'t have a lot of time to interaction each other, so I think the time of dinner is perfect for that.
but we don\'t have a lot of time to interaction each other, so I think the time of dinner is perfect for that.
>> We don\'t have much time to interact with each other, so I think dinner time is perfect for that.
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