using videoconferencing/webcams instead of travelling

2014-12-08 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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It is true that many companies have been seeking a way to reduce their operating costs. Using IT technologies is the most common way for them to achieve their goals.The systematization of their organizations, work processes, knowledge, and know-hows are one of them and replacing overseas business travels with video conference is widely used due to its convenience and low costs.Even in my company, we use web-conferencing for various meetings, so documents could be shared among participants. However, we do not use video-conferencing in which we can actually see other people on the PC monitor or TV because it’s not economical to invest quite a large amount of money in stalling cameras, software, and improving internet speed. We often develop and deliver virtual class-room type training real time, but often had streaming problems.So, sometimes, a face-to-face meeting is better and more efficient to build relationships. In-person meetings can help you feel that you're working with a human.

강사 첨삭

Sir [이름]! ^_^

Happy Monday again!

It\'s the start of another wonderful week for us.

And Christmas Day is fast approaching. Hahahaha.

Thanks for sending this in today.

I totally agree with your ideas.

In-person meetings is better than using any technology.

It will help you feel more comfortable and it lessens misunderstandings.

Thanks for a wonderful composition. Keep up the good work.
Teacher Nina


It is true that many companies have been seeking a way to reduce their operating costs.

>> correct

Using IT technologies is the most common way for them to achieve their goals.

>> correct

>> OR: Using IT technologies is the most common way to achieve what they want.

The systematization of their organizations, work processes, knowledge, and know-hows are one of them and replacing overseas business travels with video conference is widely used due to its convenience and low costs.

>> correct

Even in my company, we use web-conferencing for various meetings, so documents could be shared among participants.

>> correct

However, we do not use video-conferencing in which we can actually see other people on the PC monitor or TV because it’s not economical to invest quite a large amount of money in stalling cameras, software, and improving internet speed.

>> correct

We often develop and deliver virtual class-room type training real time, but often had streaming problems.

>> correct

So, sometimes, a face-to-face meeting is better and more efficient to build relationships.

>> correct

In-person meetings can help you feel that you\'re working with a human.

>> In-person meetings help you feel that your are working with a human.

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