using videoconferencing/webcams instead of travelling
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Sir [이름]! ^_^
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Thanks for sending this in today.
I totally agree with your ideas.
In-person meetings is better than using any technology.
It will help you feel more comfortable and it lessens misunderstandings.
Thanks for a wonderful composition. Keep up the good work.
Teacher Nina
It is true that many companies have been seeking a way to reduce their operating costs.
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Using IT technologies is the most common way for them to achieve their goals.
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>> OR: Using IT technologies is the most common way to achieve what they want.
The systematization of their organizations, work processes, knowledge, and know-hows are one of them and replacing overseas business travels with video conference is widely used due to its convenience and low costs.
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Even in my company, we use web-conferencing for various meetings, so documents could be shared among participants.
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However, we do not use video-conferencing in which we can actually see other people on the PC monitor or TV because it’s not economical to invest quite a large amount of money in stalling cameras, software, and improving internet speed.
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We often develop and deliver virtual class-room type training real time, but often had streaming problems.
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So, sometimes, a face-to-face meeting is better and more efficient to build relationships.
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In-person meetings can help you feel that you\'re working with a human.
>> In-person meetings help you feel that your are working with a human.
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