Usually all my family get together per 2~3months.
학생이 쓴 원문
All my family members get together per 2 or 3 months. whenever there is a any anniversary day or the day of memorial service, we all get together. For example, parents\' birthday, mother\'s day, New year\'s day, thanks giving day, vacations etc. Sometimes we also get together on ordinary weekends to have a dinner togother.
강사 첨삭
Hey, Ju [이름]. It is great that you get together for about two or three months with your family. Thank you for accomplishing your homework and I hope to talk to you soon after the holidays. Have a good one. ~Teacher Jane c\",)
All my family members get together per 2 or 3 months.
>> All my family members get together every two or three months.
whenever there is a any anniversary day or the day of memorial service, we all get together.
>> Whenever there is an anniversary or a memorial service, we all get together.
For example, parents\' birthday, mother\'s day, New year\'s day, thanks giving day, vacations etc.
>> For example, parents\' birthday, mother\'s day, new year\'s day, thanksgiving day, vacations, etc.
Sometimes we also get together on ordinary weekends to have a dinner together.
>> Sometimes we also get together on ordinary weeks to have dinner together.
All my family members get together per 2 or 3 months.
>> All my family members get together every two or three months.
whenever there is a any anniversary day or the day of memorial service, we all get together.
>> Whenever there is an anniversary or a memorial service, we all get together.
For example, parents\' birthday, mother\'s day, New year\'s day, thanks giving day, vacations etc.
>> For example, parents\' birthday, mother\'s day, new year\'s day, thanksgiving day, vacations, etc.
Sometimes we also get together on ordinary weekends to have a dinner together.
>> Sometimes we also get together on ordinary weeks to have dinner together.
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