Usually on birthdays, we eat with people close to us.
학생이 쓴 원문
I do homework using Google Translate to practice speaking rather than writing English myself. And practice speaking English by reading translated English sentences over and over again.
Usually on birthdays, we eat with people close to us. The birthday person pays for the meal, and those who participate give the birthday person a gift or money. In the case of male students, there are also cases where friends hit the back of a friend who celebrated their birthday as a prank.
In the case of a child\'s first birthday, all family members and parents\' friends gather to eat together and celebrate the child\'s birthday. In the past, even office workers celebrated birthdays, but these days it doesn\'t seem to be the case. Recently, it seems that there are many cases of using KakaoTalk to send gifts to close friends on their birthdays.
강사 첨삭
Hey, Elliot. I hope you are having a great Thursday. Thank you for taking the time to do the homework. It seems like people are starting to lose their connection because of technology but I admit, it is very convenient and easy both for the sender and the receiver. I hope you have a good night and enjoy your weekend. ~Teacher Jane c\",
I do homework using Google Translate to practice speaking rather than writing English myself.
>> CORRECT =)
And practice speaking English by reading translated English sentences over and over again.
>> CORRECT =)
Usually on birthdays, we eat with people close to us.
>> Usually, on birthdays, we eat with people close to us.
The birthday person pays for the meal, and those who participate give the birthday person a gift or money.
>> CORRECT =)
In the case of male students, there are also cases where friends hit the back of a friend who celebrated their birthday as a prank.
>> CORRECT =)
In the case of a child\'s first birthday, all family members and parents\' friends gather to eat together and celebrate the child\'s birthday.
>> CORRECT =)
In the past, even office workers celebrated birthdays, but these days it doesn\'t seem to be the case.
>> CORRECT =)
Recently, it seems that there are many cases of using KakaoTalk to send gifts to close friends on their birthdays.
>> CORRECT =)
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