vacation
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What was your best vacation ever and where was it?
5years ago I went to Maldive with my friend. It was my best vacation. It is my happiest time in my life.
Sky and see in Maldive was beutiful and peaceful
Lucy, I want to confirm again. Next test book is senior upper intermidiate. Is it right?
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Thank you Ms. [Name]!
Yes, it is Senior Upper Intermediate 1 :)
Lucy
5years ago I went to Maldive with my friend.
>>5 years ago I went to the Maldives with my friend.
It was my best vacation.
>>CORRECT!
It is my happiest time in my life.
>> It is the happiest time in my life.
Sky and see in Maldive was beutiful and peaceful
>>The sky and sea in the Maldives were beautiful and peaceful.
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