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2022-10-20 · 첨삭 강사 Tricia

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I think watching movie was the most impressive experience.Watching movie make me feel satisfied.So, i think it was a best experience.

강사 첨삭

Hello, David! ^^
Thank you for the composition.
See you in our next class! :)

~ Teacher Tricia


I think watching movie was the most impressive experience.
>>> I think watching a movie is the most impressive experience.

Watching movie make me feel satisfied.
>>> Watching movie makes me feel satisfied.

So, i think it was a best experience.
>>> So, I think it is the best experience.

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