Vacation!
학생이 쓴 원문
If I have winter vacation, I will go skating with my brother.
I will eat Bungeobbang with my family or my friends.
I will buy new jacket or sweather.
And than I ready for middle school~^^
This winter vacation is my last vacaton with elementary school...
So I want enjoy my winter vacation^^
강사 첨삭
Hi! Thank you for this wonderful composition. I'm really happy to hear that you now have plans for your winter vacation. Keep the fire burning!
See you in class!
T.GRACE
If I have winter vacation, I will go skating with my brother.
>> If I'll have my winter vacation. I will go skating with my brother.I will eat Bungeobbang with my family or my friends.
>> Correct!I will buy new jacket or sweather.
>>I will buy a new jacket or sweater.And than I ready for middle school~^^
>> Next is I will prepare to enter middle school.This winter vacation is my last vacaton with elementary school...
>> This winter vacation is my last as an elementary school student.So I want enjoy my winter vacation^^
>> Correct!
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