Vacation!

2012-09-12 · 첨삭 강사 Grace

학생이 쓴 원문

If I have winter vacation, I will go skating with my brother. I will eat Bungeobbang with my family or my friends. I will buy new jacket or sweather. And than I ready for middle school~^^ This winter vacation is my last vacaton with elementary school... So I want enjoy my winter vacation^^

강사 첨삭

Hi! Thank you for this wonderful composition. I'm really happy to hear that you now have plans for your winter vacation. Keep the fire burning! See you in class! T.GRACE If I have winter vacation, I will go skating with my brother. >> If I'll have my winter vacation. I will go skating with my brother.I will eat Bungeobbang with my family or my friends. >> Correct!I will buy new jacket or sweather. >>I will buy a new jacket or sweater.And than I ready for middle school~^^ >> Next is I will prepare to enter middle school.This winter vacation is my last vacaton with elementary school... >> This winter vacation is my last as an elementary school student.So I want enjoy my winter vacation^^ >> Correct!

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