vacation
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi Ms. [이름]!
You are so sweet! Thank you for explaining your idea in writing.
I really love our class. ^^ I hope you are having a great time learning with me.
I had a class before you. And we talked about Kimchi. ^^
I felt hungry after that. Hihihihi. ^^ I hope that you already ate dinner.
Talk to you soon.
Teacher Nina
We went to the restaurant because the last day of my son vacation ln the military.
>> We went to a restaurant because yesterday was my son\'s last day of vacation in the military.
>> OR: We went to a restaurant because it was my son\'s last day of vacation. He will go back to the military soon.
What were you doing before you call me?
>> Did you mean: What were you doing before you called me?
>> Better: What did you do before you called me?
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