Vacation

Hello sir,

A pleasant Wednesday to you!

Thank you for telling me about Korea. It\'s very interesting. I sure would love to visit all the places you have mentioned one day. See you in class!

Take care!

~T. Lynn

Summer vacation is coming soon.

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Many people will leave to search for various vacation spots.

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Some people is going to our country, the other people is going to go abroad.

>> Some people will be coming to our country while others will be going abroad.

There is so many place in our country to go to vacation.

>>There are many places to visit in our country for vacation.

The most famous place is Jeju Island.

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The scenery of Jeju Island is very beautiful.

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That was designated as a UNESCO World Natural Heritage site in 2007.

>> It was designated as UNESCO World Natural Heritage site in 2007.

It is also a World Geopark.

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Landscape of Juju is a very exotic.

>> The landscape of Jeju is very exotic.

It shows the trees which reflect a tropical climate.

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Gyeongju city is also worth a visit.

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Kyeongju is the ancient capital of Silla dynasty for 1,000 years and has many historic sites.

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That was designated as a World Cultural Heritage.

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We can easily see a National Treasures and Treasures in Gyeongju.

>>We can easily see National treasures in Gyeongju.

Andong is Korean tratidional city.

>>Andong is a Korean traditional city.

The city has Korean trational houses and can see Korean trational attire.

>> The city has Korean traditional houses and you can see Korean Traditional attire.

Haeundae in Busan is famous for the beach near the center of town.

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So many women is wearing bikini and enjoy a suntan.

>>So many women are wearing bikinis and are enjoying the sun.

Korea is worth a live.

>>Korea is worth a visit!