Vacation

Jay,

You are getting better in writing and grammar. Good job! Enjoy your Japan trip before going to Australia!(\",)

~Lynn

A vacation is what makes us work harder in our regular lives.

>> correct!

It also helps relieving our stress.

>> It also helps relieve our stress.

 Everyone has their own thinking about a vacation.

>> correct!

For me, going to the sauna is a good way to relieve my stress.

>> correct!

I think it would be a great vacation if I went to Sauna in winter season.

>> I think it would be a great vacation if I go to a sauna in winter season.

Japan is well known as Sauna and I have never been there before.

>> Japan is well known for their saunas but I have never been there yet.

Even though there are many Sauna in Korea, I want to experience something like atmosphere of Japanese traditional Sauna.

>> Although there are many saunas in Korea, I want to experience something like the atmosphere of Japanese traditional sauna.

Thus, before I go to Australia, I am going to go to Japan and will spend a day enjoying the Sauna.

>> Thus, before I go to Australia, I am going to go to Japan to spend a day enjoying the sauna.

It would be good.

>> correct!

 I hope it would be good memories and I could remember this memories when I get a stress.

>>  I hope I\'ll make good memories that I\'ll remember whenever I get a stress.