Vacation
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Hello Cecilia,
Thank you for doing yesterday’s homework!
I appreciate it a lot!
Please keep up the good work!
Have a great day and talk to you later!
Teacher ELLY.
Vacation
The first family trip abroad is the most memorable.
CORRECT!
or>>Our first family trip overseas was the most memorable for us.
15 years ago, my family and I went to Japan on first family trip abroad.
>>15 years ago, my family and I went to Japan for our first family trip abroad.
The other culture was interesting.
>>Their different culture was interesting.
It was good to take a bath in an outdoor spa.
CORRECT!
or>>We felt very good when we took a bath in the outdoor spa.
I went to Thailand for a vacation with my family two weeks ago.
CORRECT!
or>>My family and I went to Thailand for a vacation a couple of weeks ago.
I enjoyed the dresser code party where I had to wear white and blue clothes.
>>I enjoyed their dress code party, where I had to wear white and blue clothes.
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