Vacation is almost over.

2016-01-21 · 첨삭 강사 Kris

학생이 쓴 원문

The vacation is almost over. I have to go school next Monday.I can sleep late at vacation.But I have to get up at early.In school I can play with my friends and talk about baseball.This winter vacation times so fast that I can't do many things.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]^^


 Happy Thursday!

It seems that you are not ready to go to school because you have to wake up early. But you have to go to school for your future, anyway there will be more vacation to come for you to enjoy.

Furthermore, I appreciate your composition. I will see you in our next class.

Thank you.^^



~~ Teacher Kris



Vacation is almost over.


The vacation is almost over.

>> Correct.

 I have to go school next Monday.

>> I have to go to school next Monday.

I can sleep late at vacation.

>> I can sleep late during vacation.

But I have to get up at early.

>> But I have to get up early.

In school I can play with my friends and talk about baseball.

>> In School, I can play with my friends and talk about baseball.

This winter vacation times so fast that I can\'t do many things.

>> YOU MEAN TO SAY: This winter vacation times ends so fast that I can\'t do many things.

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