Vacations with family
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I like to travel or visit the several sites for vacation.
Sometimes I go to the seaside for fishing. And sometimes I vist the old city like Gyeongju. I often drive to some place on weekend.
Every trip I am with my son and wife.
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I like to travel or visit the several sites for vacation.
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>> OR: I like to travel or visit several sites for vacation.Sometimes I go to the seaside for fishing.
>> CORRECT:
>> OR: Sometimes I go to seaside for fishing.
And sometimes I vist the old city like Gyeongju.
>> And sometimes, I visit old cities like Gyeongju.
I often drive to some place on weekend.
>> CORRECT:Every trip I am with my son and wife.
>> CORRECT:
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