vaccination
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Actually I hadn\'t gotten cold vaccinations before I got during Covid-19. Of course I know the efficy of vaccine, but I am worried that my immune system will become weak as I depend on vaccination. Additionally I am afraid of the side effects of it. Actually I suffered a severe side effect after the second vaccination of Corona. My eyesight has dropped sharply and I have had difficulty reading books at night.
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Hi. Gi [이름]!
I feel the same way about vaccines; as much as possible, I don’t want them, but we cannot deny that some vaccines are necessary, like the ones we had as kids. I hope you don’t experience any further side effects from the COVID-19 vaccine you received.
- T. Caitlyn
Actually I hadn\'t gotten cold vaccinations before I got during Covid-19.
>> Actually, I hadn’t gotten any vaccinations for colds before I got vaccinated during COVID-19.
Of course I know the efficy of vaccine, but I am worried that my immune system will become weak as I depend on vaccination.
>> Of course, I know the efficacy of vaccines, but I am worried that my immune system will become weak if I rely on vaccination.
Additionally I am afraid of the side effects of it.
>> Additionally, I am afraid of its side effects.
Actually I suffered a severe side effect after the second vaccination of Corona.
>> CORRECT
My eyesight has dropped sharply and I have had difficulty reading books at night.
>> CORRECT
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