vaccine is the best solution of covid 19
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Covid 19 virus is spread out all over the world, and many people die. I agree that vaccine is the solution of covid19 virus.
First, I think vaccine is the most effective method because it could prevent people from being infected by virus.
Second, do not use vaccine can make some people died. If vaccine could make one person survived, it is meaningful function in itself.
However, developing covid 19 vaccine is difficult because of virus\'s transition. Therefore people should wear mask, wash their hands, and avoid crowded place.
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>>Covid 19 virus has spread all over the world, and many people have died.
I agree that vaccine is the solution of covid19 virus.
>>I agree that a vaccine is the solution for covid19 virus.
First, I think vaccine is the most effective method because it could prevent people from being infected by virus.
>>CORRECT!
Second, do not use vaccine can make some people died.
>>Second, not using a vaccine can cause the death of many people.
If vaccine could make one person survived, it is meaningful function in itself.
>>If the vaccine can help a person survive, it is a meaningful function in itself.
However, developing covid 19 vaccine is difficult because of virus\'s transition.
>>CORRECT!
Therefore people should wear masks, wash their hands, and avoid crowded places.
>>CORRECT!
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