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2019-02-18 · 첨삭 강사 Jeny

학생이 쓴 원문

Hi, teacher Jeny. Korea has stared spring vation. My daughter has to dormitory for two weeks. Because of her baggage move. She had her dormitory delivered to our home. She also arrives tonight and all the families are gather today~~ Goodbye

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]

A very exciting day to you! Thank you so much in submitting your homework.

Keep practicing on your grammar and you\'ll see that you\'ll have improvements that you don\'t even notice at all. ^^
\"In learning to know other things and other minds, we become more intimately acquainted with ourselves, and are to ourselves better worth knowing.\"
-Philip Gilbert Hamilton

See you in our class! Sweet day!

-T.Jeny




Hi, teacher Jeny.

>>correct
 Korea has stared spring vation.

>>Spring vacation has started in Korea.
 My daughter has to dormitory for two weeks.

>>My daughter has to stay in her dormitory for two weeks.
 Because of her baggage move.

>>Because she needs to move her baggage.

She had her dormitory delivered to our home.

>>She asked her dormitory to delivery it to our home.
 She also arrives tonight and all the families are gather today~~

>>She will also arrive tonight and we will have a family gathering.
 Goodbye

>>correct

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