valuable day

2016-11-11 · 첨삭 강사 Chloe

학생이 쓴 원문

Yesterday I went lecture meeting of a monk who is very famous in korea. His speech gives courage and wish to someone who are distressed and confused in life. I often listen his lecture on website when I feel depressed. It makes me happy and think positively. It was very honor to listen his speech under my eyes. He chose the message written something worries in a box and shared the trouble together and gave some advice and let us know how to solve that problom wisely. It was valuable day~! If I have a chance i will go there with my husband again.

강사 첨삭

Hello, [이름]! I am sure that you enjoyed listening to inspirational messages. True enough, they are inspiring. They even give us great hope. Anyway, just be inspired. I am going to call you again later. ~Teacher Chloe   Yesterday I went lecture meeting of a monk who is very famous in korea. >>Yesterday, I had a lecture meeting with a very famous monk in South Korea. His speech gives courage and wish to someone who are distressed and confused in life. >>His speech gives courage and hope to people who are distressed and confused in life. I often listen his lecture on website when I feel depressed. >>I often listen to his lecture on a website when I feel depressed. It makes me happy and think positively. >>Correct! It was very honor to listen his speech under my eyes. >>It was an honor and priveledge to listen to his speech with my naked eyes. He chose the message written something worries in a box and shared the trouble together and gave some advice and let us know how to solve that problom wisely. >>He chose messages that are written in pieces of paper from a box. He shared them and gave some some advice on how to solve problems wisely. It was valuable day~! >>It was a memorable day!If I have a chance i will go there with my husband again. >>If I will  have a chance, I will go there again with my husband.

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