Valuables

An interesting story about a superrich in the press in America. He was very interested in collecting antiques. He liked famous antiques very much, so he bought anything he wanted to have,even though how much or how far is it. Someday he found out a fascinating antique in an antique journal. He really yearned to have it, but he didn't know where it was. He tried to find out the antique, but it was in vain. Sometime later, he could know whereabouts of it in the journal accidently. According to the journal, the antique was possesed by a certain superrich, and he was very surprised to know that it was him. He hurriedly went to the warehouse to look for it, and found the valuable antique in the dust at last. He owned the valuable already, but he didnt recognized its worth and throwing it away to warehouse. It is a real story, and his name was Willam Randoph Hearst.

Dear [Name]. [이름],   A extravagant Friday to you! ^.^   I think some people are like the super rich in the story, and I am one of them. We keep on looking for something more valuable than what we already have. In the end, we realize that we already have that thing that we really covet or yearn.   Well, as a lesson from the story, we should be contented of what we have.   That\'s all for now! ^^ Happy reading! ^^, See you very soon! ^^.    ... Teacher Paula ... ^.~     An interesting story about a superrich in the press in America. >> It is an interesting story about a super rich who is a member of the press in America. (C1 Be sure that your sentence is complete. C2 SUPERRICH should be SUPER RICH.) He was very interested in collecting antiques. >> CORRECT! He liked famous antiques very much, so he bought anything he wanted to have,even though how much or how far is it. >> He liked famous antiques very much, so he bought anything he wanted to have, even though how much or how far it is. (C3 There should be a space before EVEN.) Someday he found out a fascinating antique in an antique journal. >> One day, he found out a fascinating antique in an antique journal. (C4 SOMEDAY should be ONE DAY. SOMEDAY means at an indefinite future time. C5 In addition, there should be a COMMA after ONE DAY.) He really yearned to have it, but he didn\'t know where it was. >> CORRECT! He tried to find out the antique, but it was in vain. >> He tried to find the antique, but it was in vain. (C6 FIND OUT should only by FIND. FIND OUT means to discover something.) >> OR: He tried to look for the antique, but it was in vain. Sometime later, he could know whereabouts of it in the journal accidently. >> Sometime later, he could know the whereabouts of it in the journal accidentally. (C7 There should be THE before WHEREABOUTS.) According to the journal, the antique was possesed by a certain superrich, and he was very surprised to know that it was him. >> According to the journal, the antique was possessed by a certain supper rich, and he was very surprised to know that it was him. (C8 See C2.) He hurriedly went to the warehouse to look for it, and found the valuable antique in the dust at last. >> CORRECT! He owned the valuable already, but he didnt recognized its worth and throwing it away to warehouse. >> He owned the valuable already, but he didn\'t recognize its worth and threw it to the warehouse. (C9 RECOGNIZED should be RECOGNIZE since you used DIDN\'T. C10 THROWING should be THREW. C11 There should be THE before WAREHOUSE.) It is a real story, and his name was Willam Randoph Hearst. >> It is a real story, and his name is William Randolph Hearst. (C12 Was should be IS.)