Valuing present satisfaction
학생이 쓴 원문
Young people nowadays believe the present is more important the future. As a result, they tend to easily give up on jobs that do not bring them immediate enjoyment. They believe that valuing present satisfaction is better t[이름] sacrificing the present for future success.
강사 첨삭
Hi Ms. [Name]~!^^ T[이름]ks for having the class with me. It feels surreal to say goodbye, but I want you to know how proud I am of everything you’ve achieved. I know you’ll continue to shine and make a positive impact wherever you go. Wishing you all the best in everything you pursue. Keep striving, keep learning, and above all, keep being you. Farewell, and may your journey be filled with success, joy, and growth.
Take care, and don\'t forget to stay in touch!
Warm regards,
>>> TEACHER GEMMA
Young people nowadays believe that the present is more important t[이름] the future.
>>> CORRECT~!^^
As a result, they tend to easily give up on jobs that do not bring them immediate enjoyment.
>>> CORRECT~!^^
OR>>> As a result, they tend to easily give up on jobs that do not bring immediate enjoyment to them.
They believe that valuing present satisfaction is better t[이름] sacrificing the present for future success.
>>> CORRECT~!^^
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