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2011-06-23 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

학생이 쓴 원문

Turbulence Ladies and gentlemen, We will be passing through turbulence. Please return to your seat and fasten your seat belt. Also, we will be suspending the beverage service. The service will be continued as soon as conditions improve. Thank you. Seat belt sign off Ladies and gentlemen, The seat belt sign is now off. For your safety, please keep your seat belt fastened while seated. When opening the overhead bins, be careful as the contents may fall out. You may now use CD Players and laptop computers. For further information on the types of electronic devices allowed on board. Please refer to the "Morning Calm" magazine in your seat pocket. Thank you.

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Turbulence
Ladies and gentlemen,
We will be passing through turbulence.

>>Correct.
>> We will experience some turbulence.

Please return to your seat and fasten your seat belt.
>> Correct.

>> Everyone is requested to return to their seats and fasten their seat belts.

Also, we will be suspending the beverage service.
>> Correct.
The service will be continued as soon as conditions improve.
>> The service will resume as soon as the condition improves.
Thank you.

Seat belt sign off
Ladies and gentlemen,
The seat belt sign is now off.
>> Correct.
For your safety, please keep your seat belt fastened while seated.
>>Correct.

>> For your safety, please remain to be seated and fastened your seatbelt.
When opening the overhead bins, be careful as the contents may fall out.
>> Correct.
You may now use CD Players and laptop computers.
>> OR: You may now enjoy your CD players and laptops.
For further information on the types of electronic devices allowed on board.
>> Correct.
Please refer to the "Morning Calm" magazine in your seat pocket.
>> OR: Please read the 밠orning Calm

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